"I am an idealistic, naive, passionate, truth-seeking, spiritually motivated artist, unschooled in the science of law and finance." --Wesley Snipes

Wednesday, March 23, 2005

Some Thoughts (Again!) on “Bad Poetry” in Response to a Blogger’s Lament that Too Many People Are Publishing and Writing Bad Poems.

Blogger proposed this: 1) poems are, first and foremost, communicative objects, and 2) artistic objects second.

I responded:


1) Regardless of what Harold Bloom or Adam Kirsch will tell you, "artistic value" is, by and large, in the eye of the beholder. Rodin for one, pink flamingos for another. To complain that too many people write crappy poems is to complain about poetry in general. There will always be "crap" by anyone's definition. It will always be mostly crap--see Sturgeon's Law. That's okay. Read the poems you like. Ignore those you don't.

2) But, if what you mean by “bad poem” is one that doesn't communicate, then we have to interrogate (each one of us) what we mean by "communication." I for one, find many poems in Hejinian's BAP that "communicate" to me. Do they all communicate in the same way, using the same pre-determined communicative conventions? Well, no. Clark Coolidge's Crystal Text, for example, doesn't "make sense" in a straightforward journalistic sort of way, but I "get" it. It definitely communicates. So to say that people are writing a lot of bad poems might be another way of saying "I don't understand or like this poem," or "this poem makes me work too hard to extricate meaning," or something along those lines.

3) One of the central tenets of many "avant-garde" movements (and I use that term loosely) is that poetry/art "communicate." The paradox arises, then, when the avant-gardist attempts to write in a "new" way that his own peeps don't quite understand. If one of the goals is to seize power from the elite, it is either a) doomed to fail because the "peeps" have been schooled at the knees of the elite, or b) doomed to fail because if "the peeps" pick up on the new lingo, the new way of expression, other peeps will too, and pretty soon, the once-avant-garde is the new orthodoxy.

4) A Very Famous Poet once wrote a letter to The Canary, explaining that, while he admired some of the poems we’d published, he felt that we had no “editorial vision” because we included a lot of Other Poems that he didn’t admire. I wanted to publish the letter in the next issue, but my co-editors thought better of it. In this context, “editorial vision” might mean “appreciation for a very stylistically limited range of poetry.”


Just some thoughts,
Tony

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

I honestly don't know jack about poetry. I do know that a lot of people think what they write is poetry, even cheerleading chants and naughty limericks.
My self talk is that unlike other forms of writing, there is not much recognition outside poetry circles and therefore some serious/professional poets want to distance themselves from crappy, inexperience, or uneducated poets. That’s just my guess.
I also think that no matter what level you achieve, there is still going to be some crap that rises to the top. Keanu Reeves’ acting is a fine example of that.

Relief Map said...

from my March 18 post on my blog:

People Need To Stop Writing Bad Poems

Is it wrong that I feel that way? I'm all for writing 'shitty first drafts', as Anne Lamott's famed essay states, and Lord knows I do it. It's just that some of what I've read lately [see L-A-N-G-U-A-G-E poetry and portions of The Best American Poetry 2004] seems so overtly concerned with form, experimenting with it, that meaning gets obscured by structure. Or, rather, meaning loses its significance altogether. If poetry is a means of communication first and an art form second, which I believe it is, doesn't this sort of 'poetry' negate the definition?

I say go ahead and mess with form, revamp the old ways to better fit them to our experience in the here and now. But, in doing so, don't forget about or--gasp--scrap the old poetic ways, just because you think Cummings was cool and want to be novel and renowned for rearranging typography. (Note: the author does not wish to remove credibility and talent from Mr. Cummings in saying this). Think of Keats and his rhyme schemes, Lorca and his repetition, Whitman and his indentation, Sexton's unexpected rhythm.

Remember, too, that, were it not for content, poetry would be merely, as Wilde put it, 'art for art's sake'. Anyone who adheres to this definition of art [though, to define art is a much larger endeavor than was first thought] is a fool. Yes, maybe some art (read: poetry) exists merely for the play of it, or as the end result of the artist's curious and persistent efforts. But does it not, then, still come into shape for reasons other than its own existence? I think so.

* * *

P.S. Poetry Dailier's the shit, and I mean that in a good way.

Unknown said...

A former prof of mine insisted that poetry was an adjective.

One wrote poems but that doesn't mean that what one wrote was poetry.

Formal or free verse, Bishop-esque or LANGUAGE...style of type is irrelevant.

One might assert that life, including art, aspires to the quality of achieving that which is poetry.

"Sing, sing a song..."

:-)

Anonymous said...

Nicely put, Tony.

vvoi said...

well,
it is true that poetry remains a tiny, little circle. my father used to tell the joke about the two poets that meet and one says to the other "i bought your last book of poetry"
"so it was you!"

new-art.blogspot.com