Poem Game R.I.P.

I guess I should clarify--I was planning on commenting on poems based on however I feel at the moment. I didn't have a set scheme, and I certainly didn't decide to do this to bash other people's poems. I apologize if that's how it's come off. In any case, I'll leave Tieger's poem/commentary here for a bit, but after that I think I'll put a halt on the game. It's not working out quite as I had hoped.